its gonna be COOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLDDDDD...
You can surely count on that. But the flow looks good. I can't comment lately, but I have never heard of ice bridges across gore?
"Life is not a journey to the grave with the intention of arriving safely in a pretty and well preserved body. But rather...To skid in broadside, thoroughly used up, totally worn out, and loudly proclaiming... WOW !!!! What a ride!!!!!!"